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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
In the dead of the night, I awoken, shutter opened. The violin stringed tight. Memories drift into the night, With a sad melody. Admist the quiet fight. Between my pride and yearning, to be your bride... Tears dropped, like broken string of pods. I miss your soul And miss you so. [This message has been edited by FNG (02-18-2006 01:41 AM).] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear FNG, I like the flow in your writing, I love poignant pieces  Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Thank you, Michelle Looking forward to your poems. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FNG~ A touching poignancy in this penning~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Thank you Marge |
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