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FNG
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0 posted 2006-02-17 11:20 PM


In the dead of the night,
I awoken, shutter opened.
The violin stringed tight.

Memories drift into the night,
With a sad melody.
Admist the quiet fight.

Between my pride
and yearning,
to be your bride...

Tears dropped,
like broken string of pods.

I miss your soul
And miss you so.


[This message has been edited by FNG (02-18-2006 01:41 AM).]

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midnightblues
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1 posted 2006-02-18 10:21 AM


Dear FNG,

I like the flow in your writing, I love poignant pieces

Love,
MiCheLLe

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FNG
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2 posted 2006-02-19 01:25 AM


Thank you, Michelle

Looking forward to your poems.

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3 posted 2006-02-19 10:54 AM


FNG~
A touching poignancy in this penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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FNG
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4 posted 2006-02-20 04:28 AM


Thank you Marge


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