Soar Like An Angel (final draft) Please Read

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Soar Like An Angel (final draft) Please Read

Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30

Posts 88
Texas,USA

0 posted 2006-02-08 12:36 PM

I posted a poem titled "She Soars Like An Eagle", but I re-edited the poem, and this is the final draft. I took this poem and put it in a picture frame for my cousin Laverne, to be placed near her coffin when that day comes. She is in her last stages of Cancer. She wanted me to write a poem for her. She heard the poem and said it was so beautiful. She was really pleased. I hope you like the new poem. Her mother is still living at 101 years of age. She has dementia and is not aware that one daughter has passed away, but will lose another soon. It is sad but life must go on!
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Laverne was an inspiration to everyone
She cherished life in hardships and fun
Being her last testament and final goal
God sends heavenly angels for her soul

Laverne's mother was 'special' in her life
Through heartaches of unbearable strife
Tending her mother's needs many years
Sharing of laughter and saddened tears

Her entire family is loved so very much
As fingertips reach for one final touch
Her great-grandson is a blessing to her
She passes her heritage, in order to enter

A beautiful legacy shared by one and all
As she answers the 'Master's Call'
Through God, shining bright and regal
Her Christian faith soars like an eagle

By: "thepassionatepoet"

[This message has been edited by Brenda Hall (02-09-2006 12:12 PM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-02-08 02:16 PM

Brenda~
So touchingly beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2006-02-08 02:18 PM

Dear Brenda

It is a poem from a loving heart and I am glad she will get to read it. We should all give words of inspiration and love while our dear ones are still with us. Love, Joyce

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2006-02-09 06:21 AM

Dear Brenda,

It is lovely, and in Christ we are all immortalized..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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