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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2006-01-05 01:29 PM


Water vapor mist

Adheres to once clear mirror

Opaque shadow looms


............................

Dennis
1-5-2006

[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (01-07-2006 08:45 PM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-01-05 01:55 PM


Dennis~
I was thinking of breath,
breathed on the mirror
... it works !

You do these so effortless perfect~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2006-01-05 02:05 PM


You took an annoying fact and made it beautiful.  Sheer talent.  Love, Joyce
Annie78
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3 posted 2006-01-05 03:01 PM


this is simply the best
Annie

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ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2006-01-05 05:26 PM


bravo! the king of haiku reigns!   ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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