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junemac
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0 posted 2005-12-22 03:27 PM



I belong to the twilight of winter

the last rays of a subtle farewell

the settling of an ethereal mist.
I dwell in the hoar-frosted lanes

crisp grass and iced berry bushes

within the starkness of every bald forest.
The Icy veneer of the evening pond

reflecting a fragile rose sunset

Is where my dreams are begun.
In the space twixt moon and pale sun

I know the peace of winters gloom

embracing natures frigid beauty.
And I can feel the hardy heartbeat

of the duck on her bitter terrain

searching for supper and a cold nest.
I belong to the twilight of winter

as the silent snow softly descends

upon the smudged silhouette of the pine.
Twilight in winter is the pause of a tepid sun

as a white breath seeps into the night

© Copyright 2005 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-12-22 03:54 PM


This is absolutely beautiful. Placing this gently into my library. Merry Christmas !!
hugs, Chris

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2 posted 2005-12-23 12:18 PM


JuneSweetJune~
I do hope you know that you are being word-courted by a gorgeously talented muse in this piece~

'Is where my dreams are begun.
In the space twixt moon and pale sun'


Mine too sweet ... mine too~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Annie78
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3 posted 2005-12-23 02:24 AM


this is beautiful....what a picture it paints
Annie

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4 posted 2005-12-23 09:11 AM


So that's where you've been.  Courting the words to this beautiful poem. Thanks for coming back.  love, Joyce
junemac
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5 posted 2005-12-23 05:38 PM


Awww thank you all so very much. I wan't hiding Joyce I promise lol. Just caught up in the christmas rush.

LOVE AND PEACE AND MAGIC TO ALL MY DEAR FRIENDS AROUND THE WORLD HERE AT THE PUB.
HUGS FROM JUNE XXXXXXXXXXXX

junemac
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6 posted 2005-12-23 05:39 PM


Awww thank you all so very much. I wan't hiding Joyce I promise lol. Just caught up in the christmas rush.

LOVE AND PEACE AND MAGIC TO ALL MY DEAR FRIENDS AROUND THE WORLD HERE AT THE PUB.
HUGS FROM JUNE XXXXXXXXXXXX

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7 posted 2005-12-23 07:44 PM


junemac:  What a lovely gift your poem is and just in time for Christmas! Hope yours is a very happy one!

Love
Betty Lou

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midnightblues
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8 posted 2005-12-24 12:05 PM


Dear June,

It is deliciously pretty you know

Love,
MiCheLLe

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