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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2005-12-19 01:20 PM



I sometimes can not help but to wonder,
what life would be without the thing of love,
or if hearts were to be torn asunder,
forced in their lives, no longer to speak of-
all they’ve ever known or chose to live by.
What sustenance could in those lives be found,
if all they’ve ever known or held so nigh,
were lost or hidden within each beat’s sound?
Could one live within such an existence?
Nay, for such is breath to life, love is too,
each beat, proves to be their life’s subsistence,
and with each one’s passing does love renew.
Love is too vast a thing, I must arrive,
That one’s heart could not, without it survive!

© Copyright 2005 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
Annie78
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
1 posted 2005-12-19 01:32 PM


all i can say is this speaks to me and lets me know it is okay to love again with the moving on.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
2 posted 2005-12-20 11:51 AM


Me too my friend

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
3 posted 2005-12-22 03:26 PM


So true and beautifully said. Thank you for bringing this poem here it has brightened my day.
Hugs June x

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
4 posted 2005-12-26 03:05 AM


The magic of words is all I can think of when I read this sweet poem. Thank you for the feelings I get when I read your poem.

pictureme2
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since 2005-11-13
Posts 194

5 posted 2005-12-28 11:02 PM


Yes love is a many splendor thing!
Faith, Hope, and Love and the greatest of these is love. Thanks for the lovely poem.
pictureme2

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