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Wake Me Up Please |
longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
This is not a happy poem But I was left wondering after visiting an old friend in a coma Wake Me Up Please Wake Me up Please, is my cry, shame you cannot hear For I’ve been in a coma, almost seven years Lying in this hospice ward, lying here alone Far from my family, far away from home Hearing every word, knowing what’s been said Listening to the people, who’d like to see me dead You feed me through a tube, or straight into my veins What I'd give, Just one chance, Taste real food again The fat nurse with the pony tail, such a love is she Skinny one, lousy bitch, degrades my dignity Pakistani Doctor with his cold hard stethoscope Interns, who cannot wait, to have a little grope Brian used to come here, every single day Never did believe in God,,,, Still he used to pray Now the twinkles gone, from his shining eyes Looks at me emotionless, no more does he cry Does he still remember, the nights of love we had In those days so long ago, before it all went bad I remember holding hands, kissing by the sea I remember everything, as if it was a dream Jamie comes up now and then, grown to quite a man Every time he comes. He holds me by the hand He always says “Ah Mum, Why can’t you give some sign?” Question never answered,,,,, monitor beats in time My precious, precious baby, was only two years old Now she’s simply gorgeous. Hair a silken gold She still comes by to visit, forgets me more each day Just a fading memory. Simply won’t go away I hear the doctors talking. They say that it’s now time Who will be the one. To disconnect my lines I cannot say I’m scared of Death. I’ve nothing left to fear Wake Me up Please, is my cry, shame you cannot hear .........................beep ................... beep..................... beep........................beep..............................beep .. . Live It |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
OH my this one left me with a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. I felt the pain in your words. beep beep beep! Thanks for writing this and sharing it. pictureme2 |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is so sad and especially gripping since written from the viewpoint of the patient. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
longte: Well written and gives us an insight as to what it could be like, being the one in a coma. It is very sad! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
longte this is exactly why my instructions are so very clear. thanks for sharing must have been hard to write. Annie |
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