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Anger |
longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Anger Oh so delicate the touch Gently feeling for the spot Sneaking past my outer guard Trickling; not yet hot Oozing past my inhibitions Reaching very deep Quietly is spreading out Into my veins now seeps Unconscious of its machinations Mood begins to swing Something’s changed and rearranged I didn’t feel a thing Music that was beautiful Takes on an ugly sound Temptation like a rattlers bite As I look around Coiled inside; relentless Effortless it climbs Rage is near upon me Feeling is sublime .. . Live It |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
I know this feeling well....great write Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Great description of rage. Joyce |
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whitedove Junior Member
since 2005-11-26
Posts 42 |
Great poem - exactly how it feels |
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