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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2005-10-29 06:43 PM


Whispers In The Night

Rooms whisper in the night time and
Walls echo back their words,
Their voices as melodious
As strange, exotic birds.

I try to understand them, but
They speak in foreign phrase.
I'm taunted by the sounds of night
And quiet of the days.

When you were here to murmur your
Sweet love song in my ear
The walls were blatant listeners
And strained to overhear.

Perhaps they now are speaking of
The way it used to be
When the whispers in the night time
Were love words for you and me.

By: Joyce10/29/05


© Copyright 2005 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-10-29 09:21 PM


OhJoyce~
I thought I heard the softest poetic susurrus coming from the corner of the pub~

This is beautiful ... poignantly beautiful~
Sending to you this night~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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2 posted 2005-10-29 09:46 PM


Dear Joyce:

A lovely poem!  I enjoyed reading it.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Beasley
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3 posted 2005-10-30 09:32 AM


That's beautiful, Joyce.
Love, Barb

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4 posted 2005-11-11 07:17 PM


ah, dear Joyce. what a romantic you are..  

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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5 posted 2005-11-12 09:15 AM


Soft and lovely Joyce.
Much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Annie78
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6 posted 2005-11-12 10:00 PM


Joyce i loved this....the whispers at night now will not seem so hostile.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Verbena
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7 posted 2005-11-22 07:36 AM


Dear Joyce

What a passionate poem!  A lovely verse indeed!

Love Verbena xo


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8 posted 2005-11-26 11:35 AM


Very Nice

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9 posted 2005-11-27 06:11 PM


Oh I found this so sad, and wish we could keep everything for always the way it was.  Great write Joyce, lot of emotions churned in this one.
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