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When October Comes |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
When October Comes When October comes, I go, To the stream where cattails grow. Where the ruddy rose hips glow And the bare, brown branches show. Then the sky's a different hue. Summer's not so dark a blue. Snowy days are drawing near. Winter whispers in my ear, Promises of crystal nights, Crispy mornings, cold delights. Stolen moments find me out, Scuffling burnished leaves about! Savoring the tangy air. Seeing beauty everywhere. How I treasure every day, As the autumn slips away. One more glance at lake and sky, Turn away and with a sigh, Store each image I hold dear, When October comes, each year! Betty Lou Hebert Published by Rhyme Time Magazine, 1986 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ You *gift* me with such glorious imagery~ I've always loved October ... thank you for sharing~ This is BEAUTY ... sheer BEAUTY~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ AND ... special *October Huglets* for my Ronnie guy ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
BettyLou I just loved this.... Snowy days are drawing near. Winter whispers in my ear. I could picture it all....great Job! Best |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice Betty. October truly is wonderful and you drew a beautiful word picgure. love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Enjoy the month! Ron sends his love. he is making Halloween cards now! Watch the mail! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Best: Thanks for your comments and for reading. Glad you enjoyed it! Betty Lou |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: Thanks! Hope you are having an enjoyablwe autumn! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Verbena Member
since 2005-10-17
Posts 196Australia |
Dear Betty Lou I can just smell that air too! A wonderful poem! Love Verbena xo |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Verbena: We certainly have had a lot of tangy air this fall. Lots of slash burning and field burning going on the last month or so. Thanks for reading! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
You give me a warm feeling on a chilly October day. See now I am gonna look at it differently. Lovely poem Hugs from June xxx |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear June: Thanks! The fall of the year is really my favorite season, even though it is rather melancholy at times! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
It's so wonderful to get back in here and read your terrificness!!!!!!! Love ya, Barb |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Barb: Thank you so much! It's wonderful to see you here once more. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
your cadence is wonderful as you draw us into the beauty of fall.. bravo! the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pegasus111: Thank you for those lovely words! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
An enjoyable read. I always dread winter but reading your words gave me some warmth. Thanks. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pictureme2: Nice to hear from you and thanks for commenting. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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