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0 posted 2005-10-06 04:30 PM






When October Comes

When October comes, I go,
To the stream where cattails grow.
Where the ruddy rose hips glow
And the bare, brown branches show.
Then the sky's a different hue.
Summer's not so dark a blue.
Snowy days are drawing near.
Winter whispers in my ear,
Promises of crystal nights,
Crispy mornings, cold delights.
Stolen moments find me out,
Scuffling burnished leaves about!
Savoring the tangy air.
Seeing beauty everywhere.
How I treasure every day,
As the autumn slips away.
One more glance at lake and sky,
Turn away and with a sigh,
Store each image I hold dear,
When October comes, each year!



Betty Lou Hebert

Published by Rhyme Time Magazine, 1986

© Copyright 2005 Betty Lou Hebert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-10-06 07:28 PM


BettyLou~
You *gift* me with such glorious imagery~
I've always loved October ... thank you for sharing~
This is BEAUTY ... sheer BEAUTY~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

AND ... special *October Huglets* for my Ronnie guy !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2005-10-06 09:09 PM


BettyLou
I just loved this....

Snowy days are drawing near.
Winter whispers in my ear.

I could picture it all....great Job!

Best

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3 posted 2005-10-07 12:15 PM


Very nice Betty.  October truly is wonderful and you drew a beautiful word picgure.  love, Joyce
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4 posted 2005-10-07 01:49 PM


Dear Marge:

Enjoy the month! Ron sends his love. he is making Halloween cards now! Watch the mail!

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2005-10-07 01:51 PM


Best:  Thanks for your comments and for reading. Glad you enjoyed it!

Betty Lou

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6 posted 2005-10-07 01:52 PM


Dear Joyce:  Thanks!  Hope you are having an enjoyablwe autumn!

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2005-10-23 04:07 AM


Dear Betty Lou

I can just smell that air too!  A wonderful poem!

Love Verbena xo


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8 posted 2005-10-23 05:39 AM


Dear Verbena:  We certainly have had a lot of tangy air this fall. Lots of slash burning and field burning going on the last month or so. Thanks for reading!

Love
Betty Lou

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9 posted 2005-10-27 11:43 AM


You give me a warm feeling on a chilly October day. See now I am gonna look at it differently.
Lovely poem
Hugs from June xxx

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10 posted 2005-10-28 01:31 PM


Dear June:  Thanks! The fall of the year is really my favorite season, even though it is rather melancholy at times!

Love
Betty Lou

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11 posted 2005-10-30 09:30 AM


It's so wonderful to get back in here and read your terrificness!!!!!!!
Love ya, Barb

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12 posted 2005-10-30 01:38 PM


Barb:  Thank you so much!  It's wonderful to see you here once more.

Love
Betty Lou

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13 posted 2005-11-11 07:16 PM


your cadence is wonderful as you draw us into the beauty of fall..  bravo!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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14 posted 2005-11-13 11:08 PM


pegasus111:  Thank you for those lovely words!

Betty Lou

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15 posted 2005-11-14 12:10 PM


An enjoyable read. I always dread winter but reading your words gave me some warmth.
Thanks.

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16 posted 2005-11-16 12:12 PM


pictureme2:  Nice to hear from you and thanks for commenting.

Betty Lou

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