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bestgirl911
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0 posted 2005-10-04 10:18 PM


I only danced that way with you
We only moved that way together
I know you remember it too.
It will be a part of us forever.

Relationships fall and memories fade
But we got to dance for a while
Nothing will ever be the same
It’s in your eyes and in your smile

We’ve moved on, still great friends
We talk and laugh with each other
No more dances, we’ve past the end
But we’ll remember it forever.

We dream of dancing once more
Moving to the music again
But time has closed that door
No more dances for us my friend.

I only danced like that way with you
We only moved that way together
I know you remember it too.
It will be a part of us forever.

© Copyright 2005 Ranea Ratza - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-10-05 10:08 AM


This is touchingly sweet.  Glad to see you here.  Joyce
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2 posted 2005-10-05 12:54 PM


Ranea~

Poetess, this is lovely~
Word lacing so softly done~

I'm so glad you're here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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bestgirl911
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3 posted 2005-10-05 07:54 PM


Thank you both so much...I always feel so welcome here.
I come often and read the beautiful poetry but my muse hasn't really been with me as of late.
Thanks again for the nice comments

Ranea

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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4 posted 2005-10-06 05:33 AM


this is so very beautiful, very emotive.
Lovely poem and I look forward to reading more from you
Hugs June xxx

Obsidian Snow
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5 posted 2005-10-06 10:19 AM


Indeed a beautiful writing that makes me hope your muse gives you much more and soon.
bestgirl911
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Clio, MI , United We Stand
6 posted 2005-10-06 09:04 PM


Thank you both for the kind comments....I hope I can get back into the swing of things soon....
Ranea

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