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Heart for Sale

Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2005-07-23 02:39 AM

Blue light, Red light special
heart for sale
limited edition and still beating
come one, come all
resilient of love punctures
but not needed any longer
all broken hearted welcome
if replacement is what you seek
complete hearts come
a spare can never hurt
love will tear that full to shards
heart for sale
it tells jokes
proveides love, and makes julian fries
come one and fall
I don't need this heart
no, not anymore.

(A bit of a forced write. I thought it would sound nice if read. i hope you all enjoy.)

nice use of muffin

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2005-07-23 11:06 AM

I did like your lighthearted offer of a broken heart. I hope you keep it long enough for it to mend. Sounds as though its made of good stuff. I enjoyed. Joyce

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2005-07-24 09:49 AM

Its not bead I liked it alot. Sometimes I feal juust like that you know. lol

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LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2005-07-25 08:03 PM

It is a nice little piece, but I do pick up the ruefulness (<--is that a word? :P) in this piece. I enjoyed it, however. Very clever.

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

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