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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2005-07-19 12:34 PM


(revised and reposted)

The youthful beauty of an unlined face,
Unsullied by the use that lies ahead
Has still the freshness of an unturned page.
A book to show its worth must have been read.
True fairness shows when beauty dwells within,
No need to fear effects of time's swift pace.
Though chance of fate can its bright radiance dim
And leave sad mark on that beloved face.
Beauty untried is beauty quite unearned;
Fair to behold with worthiness unproved.
The cherished face with lines of living burned
Will to true lover surely be more loved.
The beauty not reflected in the glass
Remains when more apparent charms shall pass.

Joyce


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1 posted 2005-07-19 01:34 PM


Dear Joyce:  A wonderful tribute to life! The beauty within surpasses any physical attributes!  Bravo!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2005-07-19 01:47 PM


Hi Betty.  I thought I'd post this to show that I truly do have a higher standard than the prior poem that I wrote just for fun, indicated.  Thanks for reading. Love Joyce
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3 posted 2005-07-20 04:05 AM


Joyce, I read this after taking a bath and looking at fresh lines on my face as I applied make-up. Wow did this poem make me feel so much better. Lovely !! Just inspirationally lovely. Thanks for making today special.
Hugs June xxxxxxxx

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4 posted 2005-07-21 06:28 PM


Beautiful and true words! I'm glad you reposted this, I enjoyed it m uch!

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

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5 posted 2005-07-26 08:11 AM


so true dear Joyce. lovely sentiment.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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6 posted 2005-07-29 10:16 AM


Dear Joyce

This is a wonderful poem!  It shows true grace!

Love Isobel xo


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