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theinkquill
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0 posted 2005-07-17 06:01 PM



TRUTH

SEPTEMBER 11, 2002
ONE YEAR AFTER THE ATTACK ON AMERICA
STILL TRYING TO CONVINCE YOURSELF
THINGS ARE GOING TO GET BETTER
MAYBE IT WILL, MAYBE IT WON’T
WHO AM I TO SAY
ALL I KNOW IS THAT GOD IS IN CHARGE
AND HE’S COMING BACK ONEDAY

THE WORLD HAS ITS EYE’S CLOSED
BLIND TO THE TRUTH AND FACTS
WHAT HAPPENED A YEAR AGO TODAY
WAS FAR BEYONG TERRORIST ATTACKS
SEE WE’RE LIKE A RASH ON GOD
AND ITS ITCHING ALL THE TIME
SO GOD DECIDES TO SCRATCH IT
AND FOR A LITTLE WHILE HE’S FINE

NOW YOU GET MAD START LOOKING FOR A FIGHT
KNOWING THE ODDS ARE AGAINST YOU
YOUR ARMS ARE TO SHORT TO BOX WITH GOD
SATAN I THOUGHT YOU KNEW
WHAT HAPPENED HAS HAPPENED, WHAT’S DONE IS DONE
IF YOU MISSED THE MESSAGE, DON’T WORRY
ONE WAY OR ANOTHER, GOD WILL GET YOUR ATTENTION
SEPTEMBER 11, 2001 PROVES, BY ANY MEANS NECESSARY

Copyright ©2004 Trent Brooks http://www.realitypoetry.com


© Copyright 2005 Trent Brooks - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-07-17 07:32 PM


Trent~
The all caps makes it extremely difficult to read easily~

Hoping you will take that into consideration and give us another typed out with upper and lower case, like the 'Thank You' one~

You've got some good poetic ideas~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2005-07-17 08:23 PM


And opnly god has the answer.  Joyce
theinkquill
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3 posted 2005-07-17 09:21 PM


thank you both, i'll keep the caps in mind. thats what i get for copy and paste.

iq http://www.realitypoetry.com


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4 posted 2005-07-27 09:35 PM


I really like this little note its funny, my best friend was just talking about God and his plan I feel that we all need to open our eyes just a little wider!! Thanks for the thoughts!
theinkquill
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5 posted 2005-07-31 05:16 PM


You R welcome.

iq
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