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theinkquill
Junior Member

since 2005-07-15

Posts 38
Texas

0 posted 2005-07-17 05:55 PM

WHERE WERE U DADDY???

WHERE WERE U DADDY WHEN I CAME OUT OF THE WOUND
WHEN MOTHER ALMOST DIED
WHERE WERE U WHEN DOCTORS SAID I WOULDN’T MAKE IT
WHEN MOM AND THE FAMILY CRIED
WHERE WERE U DADDY WHEN I TOOK MY 1ST STEP
WHEN I SAID MY 1ST WORD, HAPPY
WHERE WERE U PUBERITY STARTED
WHEN THE EXPLANATION CAME FROM GRANDDADDY
WHERE WERE U DADDY WHEN I CAUSED PROBLEMS AS A KID
WHEN MOM WANTED 2 SAY GO TELL YOUR DADDY WHAT U DID
WHERE WERE U WHEN I NEEDED A FRIEND
WHEN I NEEDED SOMEONE 2 TALK 2
WHERE WERE U DADDY WHEN LIFE GOT HARD
WHEN DOORS WERE HARD 2 OPEN, HARDER 2 WALK THROUGH
WHERE WERE U WHEN I WAS SICK
WHEN I COULND’T GET OUT OF BED
WHERE WERE U DADDY WHEN THE BAD DREAMS CAME
WHEN I COULDN’T GET THEM OUT OF MY HEAD
WHERE WERE U WHEN I FELL DOWN
WHEN MY KNEES WERE SCARED AND BRUISED
I’M NOT ANGRY I JUST NEED 2 KNOW
DADDY WHERE WERE U

WHERE WERE U DADDY WHEN I STARTED SCHOOL
WHEN THE BAD GRADES CAME HOME
WHERE WERE U WHEN MOM TOOK ILL
WHEN SHE STILL RAISED ME ON HER OWN
WHERE WERE U DADDY WHEN MOM GOT A BOYFREIND
WHEN I DIDN’T HANDLE IT SO WELL
WHERE WERE U WHEN HE WHIPPED ME
WHEN THE LICKS HURT LIKE HELL
WHERE WERE U DADDY WHEN I STARTED DATING
WHEN I MET MY 1ST GIRL
WHERE WERE U AS I WAS GROWING UP
WHEN I HAD TO FACE THE WORLD
WHERE WERE YOU DADDY WHEN…
NEVER MIND I JUST WANNA KNOW
WHERE WERE U THEN

I’M NOT A BOY, I’M NOW A MAN
HAVE A LIFE U HAD NO PART OF
YOU’RE MY DADDY AND U ALWAYS WILL BE
BUT THE MAN THAT RAISED ME IS MY FATHER

Copyright ©2004 Trent Brooks http://www.realitypoetry.com

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2005-07-24 05:30 PM

interesting write..People go through this who do not have a father. I can relate...

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

theinkquill
Junior Member

since 2005-07-15

Posts 38
Texas

2 posted 2005-07-24 10:21 PM

thank you. glad you enjoyed this piece.

iq http://www.realitypoetry.com

The One & Only
Member

since 2005-01-26

Posts 58
Kansas USA

3 posted 2005-07-27 09:44 PM

I had many of where were you daddys in my time although i had some one to take his place and was good to me. but I still want to know where you were when i wanted to know were i come from! Thanks For having me see there are other out there like me!!

theinkquill
Junior Member

since 2005-07-15

Posts 38
Texas

4 posted 2005-07-31 05:15 PM

Glad you ejoyed this peice.

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