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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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No definition given- To a desert filled with- Desolate soul, Lost indeed in passion, Love, oh how they all did- Without knowing the prize, Their heart clings to each memory- Dripping of pleasure and pain, Soaked in this- They breathe one beat- One lash whips at a time, No sense of relief, Tortured are these souls- Whose savior came in disguise, Abandon love with no hope, Redemption stops fleetingly, No lessons remained unread, Only blush of lust touched them, And with it came their demise, So swiftly- a devilish touch. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ronil~ A thought-provoking penning, for sure~ Nice to see you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Wow I am speechless, this is indeed how it often is. What an excellent writer you are my friend. Hugs June x |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thanks for your comments... I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Dark, yet lovely.. how painful it can be to be misled, in any degree or on any level. A wonderful piece, I enjoyed this. Love's a lovely lad |
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