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Prophecy 1 |
longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
This is the first part of what turned into a fairly long poem Took a few hours to write I enjoyed writing it But it is LONG Prophecy The country was in turmoil, only chaos to be seen We went up to the castle, invited by the king Surrounded by his minions, he just looked tired and old So much for his Knights, they didn’t look too bold The Jesters and Dwarves were trying to amuse But for all their efforts, they only got abuse Princess royal, has always been a prissy little bitch Now screaming like a Harpy, demanding her last wish The silly little fool, too spoilt to understand Had stolen a Dragon egg, now Chaos stalked the land For this was not a Dragon egg, like others she had seen The egg itself, had been laid, by the Dragon Queen Only once in several lifetimes, will the Dragon Queen give birth Now her Rage was evident, there was no peace on Earth A Dragon in a normal mood is fearsome to the eye Now endless flights of Dragon wings, shimmered in the sky Now man once more had called on us, to come and lend a hand Hoping the Prince of Thieves, can bring peace to his land It may seem a simple thing, return a Dragons Egg Those before us tried it….. Before us all were dead The prince, he was of human kind, very clear to me I am slightly different… Later on you’ll see Both of us were in disguise, up to the castle gate Now we stood before the throne… prayed we’re not too late For Dragon eggs are sentient…. Need their mother near All that I could feel from it, was hopelessness and fear I knew it felt safest, in the Princesses arms Somehow it realised, she did not mean it harm Still the Princess royal, raged about her rights She could send this world, into endless night If you cared to see it, from her point of view She had read the prophecy. Tried to make it true Prophecies are dangerous things… Read in many ways No-one truly knows the outcome, no matter what they say The pointed ears of the Prince, were twitching as I rose “The Prince and I, Dragon egg… Princess also goes” A sob shattered the silence, flung down by these words The King had read the prophecy, so he had observed “A Prince, Princess royal, a Beast and Dragon Egg Would not return together… Some perhaps were dead” The Prophecy was bound, by things beyond his ken Fore Doomed that this would happen.. only question when Wizard in the background, then shouted out with glee “That is an Elfin Prince. No Human prince is he Forget that Prophecy my King. It’s bound to human kind No other can fulfil it… You can relax your mind” So it came to pass, that we three as a band Left there with the Dragon egg, to cross a troubled land No knights were there as escort. Just we three alone Darkness ruled our mission, into the Dragons home The Prince of course was gallant… Required in such a man Princess still a surly bitch, trailed our tiny band Too many years of luxury, had left her soft and weak Demanded she be carried, even o’er the smallest creek I unfortunately, was forced to walk beside As protection for the egg…. Maybe more besides In troubled days and nights, we travelled cross the plain At last we were in sight, of the mountain range The Princess royal was changing… More likeable each day For trouble binds together, , can be no other way Faerie camp ahead, ablaze with spectral lights Princess stands in awe, swooning with delight Prince is not so happy. He knows the danger there For if you fall asleep, you’ll sleep 1000 years But we were exhausted, and so we staggered in A welcome and a party, like none we’d ever seen A flitterball of crimson light, dancing through the air Spectacles and miracles, way beyond compare Faerie King was absent. Perhaps that’s just as well Ransom is his closest friend and you can never tell Of course, the Faeries knew me. That would count for much We would now be safe in here. Me they would not touch Prince and Princess royal, danced amongst the trees Faerie music following. Gentle as the breeze I motioned them to sleep. Told they they’d be safe My kind needs not sleep. That we can forsake So they slept as revelry, whispered through the night The egg and I watched over them, until Dawns grey light Many were the wonders, which happened in-between Yet as always with the Faeries, some are best unseen Silly little mortals, who think they rule this land Would gaze on them in wonder, but never understand It was a shame I had to watch. Could not play along Faeries always like to tease… Of course they play that song The song ignited moonbeams, dryads danced in time Fireflies and Wherry lights, following in line With the dawn the music died. Faeries disappeared Lethargy crept upon me. Seems my time was near Time to find the Dragon Queen, give her back her young Before I went into my change and we were all undone We could not just approach her cave. She would not understand This was not a friendly time for Dragonkind and man The Labyrinth, with perils five, was just before us now I must see my charges through. See them through somehow A shrieking demon from beyond was first to test our way The prince now showed his mettle. True hero in this fray Living Dark, Insidious, tried to drag us in Princess with her poise and charm, ensured it could not win The final three the usual ones. Ones that live on fear Depression Sloth and Apathy, loitered in the air Of course they were my victims, I merely ate them all Escorted my companions, into the final hall Vamphyr Lord glared at us, Stung by our success But when he looked into my soul, raged in helplessness Vamphyr Lords though decadent, know when they are beat Bowed to Prince and Princess…Gracious in defeat Hidden memories in our minds, there to lead us on Through the caves of mist and woe, seeking Dragon song Dragon egg was active now, ever changing hues Once translucent opal, then a vivid blue I was growing weaker; the Change was now on me We Must be there before the Change, or share the infamy So we entered Dragon Cave, by the hidden ways Shaded by my mystery, from the Dragons gaze Now all of you have seen, a Dragon in the sky How many living now have looked, into a Dragons eye I never could explain it. Perhaps I never can Yet I can understand them, much easier than man Imagine you are in a cave, with weakly glowing light You see an odd shaped rock, over to your right As you look, a movement, a shimmer in the air A shifting of a living rock. The Dragon now appears Where all was grey like rock before, colours fill the night Copper, Bronze, Ruby Red, Purple, flash of White The Flexing of the Dragon, reflected in his scales A rainbow mirror flickering, with all that this entails Then the head, turns to you, freezes with its gaze Eyes once shuttered, now are wide. All is bright as day Description now defeats me. It’s always been the same Beauty, Arrogance, Delight. How could I explain We were in the cave, of the Dragon Queen at last Through careful use of Mystery, avoided Dragon blast The egg knew it was close to home. Quivered as we strode Colours flashing through the shell, almost that it glowed Prince and Princess royal, Determined to the end Followed in my mystery, around the final bend There she was before us. A Raging Dragon Queen Seeking blood atonement, from those as yet unseen My Change was now upon me. My end was coming soon Mystery was waning, as we approached our doom The Queen, despite her Rage, was clearly first to see She Screamed “How could you Fools fulfil the Prophecy” “This Prophecy is written, in the Dragons egg One of you must Die. It’s All upon your head Two Humans and a Beast. But one cannot survive My egg has been returned. Who is it will die?” At her words the Prince of Thieves, lost his Elfin ways Princess royal looked at him, wonder in her gaze Egg was placed into, mothers loving claws There it simply cracked apart, without a single pause I, for once as dignified, as any Troll can be Opened my mind to humankind, so they could plainly see The Dragonlet was motionless, curled inside the shell If Dragon look could kill. We would be in Hell My time of Change and Rearrange was coming to an end Phophecy would be fulfilled. Troll would soon be dead As I crumpled silently, to lie upon the ground My Spirit, now in Dragonlet. Sat and looked around ... .. . If you enjoyed it I will add the rest here somewhere Live It |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed it....I loved it kept reading faster and faster the composition was well done....and cannot wait for more, more, more!!!! Thanks a bunch for not only writing this, but sharing it.... butcha need to tell that Dragon Queen to get Jiggy with it...hehe Loved your depiction of the princess, your sense of humor shows through... Well done, and thank you for writing and sharing.... Now, come here, sit down, closer, that's right, closer, awwww comeon, closer, that's it....now, WHENS PART TWO AIR? oppsie, sorry, didn't mean to hurt your ears...I'm just so excited, this was fun, exciting, a sit on the edge of your seater...should make an annimated movie of it..you silly lil troll. as you may have noticed, patience is not a virtue of mine. Can't wait! |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Hi Lee Looks like nobody else enjoyed it If you like I will send the rest to you by email Peter Live It |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Terrific writing. I can not reason why it had been skipped over. But LeeJ saw it and her replies count for ten others. martyjo |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh i did read this before and was impressed. i don't know why I didn't answere. I guess I was waiting for the rest of the story. I'm printing that off now. Joyce |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Hi all I dont know how to delete this The complete poem is called Prophecy Complete It is in this section somewhere Peter |
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