Corner Pub #2 |
Storm |
longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
The Storm The Kookaburra’s laugh still lingered in the air Hot and heavy felt the pressure in a baleful atmosphere The dog lay on the porch …. Listless in the shade The water like a mirror… right across the bay Beneath the setting sun, the world now held its breath Maybe the heat would go away when sun was laid to rest But still the air grew thicker… to make it hard to breathe The gum trees in the corner began to drop their leaves The Storm God looked around him and said, “It’s time to play” And so he brought his game down to us, that hot and sultry day A slight shiver on the water .. a movement on the bay The first clear indication that something was on the way From the mountains in the distance beside the setting sun The first grey chariots of cloud set into a run Darkness dropped upon us as they blotted out the sun Then Thunder in the distance … the Storm God had begun A roiling twisting mass of cloud descended on the plain Spreading quickly everywhere without a hint of rain The gum trees in the corner just seemed to come alive As the first quick gusts of wind started to arrive The branches on these trees now begin to heave As they realise too late …this is no summer breeze The Bay no longer mirror but instead a churning mess The Storm God in his element…. Master of this chess His battalions marching onward“ Forward to the sea Lightning Flash and Thunder Roar .. On with ecstasy” The Darkness comes alive as the Lightning touches ground With the Roaring of the Thunder you hear no other sound The Lightning now from East to West Emblazoning the sky Daggers of Light from left to right without a reason why The Storm Gods getting angry now The Wind begins to howl And you can hear within it the screaming of lost souls The shutters on the windows are begging to be freed The house itself just feels alive.. As if it too can breathe The Storm has reached the sea and begins to dissipate With lightning strikes much fewer now as if it’s all too late Next the sounds of silenceThen the healing rain And a whisper from the distance “I will be back again” I LOVE Storms Something so Energising about them Live It |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LongTe~ Oh my ! How very, very much I enjoyed this scenic trip~ It was almost as though a travel agent were displaying a brochure before my very eyes~ I wanted to book the trip ! Thank you so much for sharing~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
longte: This was a great description of the atmosphere before, during and after a major electric storm. I have a friend who lives in Queensland and she has described some of the storms they have there. Pretty scary! Trillium Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love storms too |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderful use of imagery and descriptions. Very well done! |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Thankyou all It was deserving of a poem the way it just swept in Live It |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
very descriptive, making it come alive for me too, but will just stay in the cellar if you don't mind Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Yes something so refreshing about the after storm. I could feel it as I read. You are very good..keep writing and posting. martyjo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I too love storms! Enjoyed yours very much! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well after all that I was very glad the rains came. Very descriptive. Joyce |
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