Lost Heart - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Corner Pub #2

Lost Heart

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-05-09 03:18 PM

Excuse me,
Can you help me?
I am looking for my heart,

This angel had it,
She wanted to keep it,
With it she took my love,
My life, and my happiness,

But, where is she now?
You don’t know either?
I thought you could help,
Find my other half,

Days have become weeks,
And weeks months,
Still she is no where,
Tears have left my eyes,

She said she would be close,
Then why am I looking?
She promised that if I love her,
She would stay near,

Wait, this is not the whole tale,
I did break her heart,
Not once, twice, or thrice,
But eight times,

Don’t say that I deserve it,
Why can’t you help?
Help me find her,
Will she forgive me?

I have lost her love,
And a chance at clemency,
Is losing love so bad?

You wouldn’t know,
For you still have your heart.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2005-05-10 12:01 PM

Most of us have lost our hearts a few times. Takes diligence and especially fidelity to find it again. Joyce

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-05-10 05:48 PM

Nicely done, enjoyed the read.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2005-05-10 05:53 PM

thanks..I write what I go through (fictional)

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

4 posted 2005-06-27 03:42 AM

Like this one very much. I truly thought that last line was excellent.
Hugs June x

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.