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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Smite heavily my brow with weapons fierce Thrust angrily with wicked steel to pierce Send brigands boldly crashing at my door To strip the naked flesh, my blood to pour Loose dragons’ fire to char my shattered bone In satan’s darkness deep and all alone Vile demons searing talons at my breast Agonies to pound my senses without rest Yet, none of these I fear as much as this That I may nere again thy lips to kiss Those tortures are miniscule by degree To loss of your sweet face eternally This cross I bear is mine alone through fate My sin is that I simply came to late This truth is etched in flame with numbing pain Such love that might have been I'll never gain Farewell my almost love for now we part My icy blood seeps slowly from my heart the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pegasus111: This is even painful to read! I can only hope it is a case of masterful writing and not personal experience! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I hold the same view as Trillium. I hope you are writing poetry and not truth. A masterful job. Love, Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
No, my dear friends. It is but the spawn of a demented mind...LOL Thank you for your concern. It is good to have friends who care... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm partial to sad poetry I do like this one |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
i agree tis painful to read, beautiful, but painful and am glad to know tis just masterful writing....this is wonderful Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
For the three or four times a year that I decide to post here, I always find something from you thats more deep and more interesting than the last! To go from something so dark/painful/sinister to something so filled with love/admiration/lust and tie it all together is as saddening and tragic as it is heartfelt and honest feeling. Kudos Pegasus. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Fantastic writing. You touch the very soul of this reader .... I understand this too. Hugs June xxxxx |
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