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Trillium
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0 posted 2005-04-16 06:26 PM







Lost Yesterday

Black trees are etched against the glow
Of sunset's sky and down below,
The winter fields, adrift with snow.

Up in the Heavens, cold and clear,
Aurora's colors soon appear,
To dominate the atmosphere.

A silent symphony of red,
That swirls and dips above my head,
Like meteors that fell and bled.

Such beauty leaves me awed and still.
I stand alone, entranced until
I am aware of evening's chill.

And even when I go inside,
The walls, this spectacle can't hide.
Within my mind, I see the tide.

I never watch it fade away.
In memory, alive, to stay,
Just as in that lost yesterday!


Betty Lou Hebert


© Copyright 2005 Betty Lou Hebert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-04-16 07:54 PM


Very nice, Betty.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2005-04-16 08:27 PM


This is so beautiful.
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3 posted 2005-04-17 04:59 PM


This is a wonderfully crafted piece Betty..  

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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4 posted 2005-04-17 06:12 PM


Dear Joyce:  Nice to hear from you! Thanks.

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2005-04-17 06:13 PM


Smart Chick:  Thanks for reading!

Betty Lou

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6 posted 2005-04-17 06:15 PM


pegasus111:  Always appreciate your remarks. Thanks!

Betty Lou

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7 posted 2005-04-17 07:19 PM


very very descriptive, and can picture these in my own mind. love your work always will...thanks for sharing
Annie

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8 posted 2005-04-17 08:51 PM


Annie;  Thanks for your nice remarks. I appreciate them!

Betty Lou

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