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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here 
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the lightening burned thru the sky the thunder cut with such might the flames of candles whispering on my walls the only glow in a panther black night music from a new cd mingles with the sound of rain the scent of dark leaves a fresh new stain their shadows dancing with light of moon touches genle, moans so soft love sung with sweet new tune your love hitting like thunder rolls lightening burns sharp tatooing my heart JoAnne Burt 03/24/05 (all rights reserved) there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
ooohhh....I likes this one. Life may not be the party we hoped for, but while we're here we might as well dance. |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
why thank you lady Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
please bear with all....kinda misspelled and got some lines out of order....whacha gonna do with us amatuers Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
this is very romantic and vivid, Annie. maybe you mean "lightning'? thanks for the love-ly thoughts. |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
lol jjote i'm sure that i meant lightning. don't know how i got so discombobbled on this one but boy did i ever. thank you for your comments. Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very descriptive an imaginative Annie. Love, Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I like what you did with this..I could feel the rain on my face..hear the music..lovely..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
thank you all for your comments, will try to get it together for next one. Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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DejaEntendu Member
since 2005-12-06
Posts 82Pennsylvania |
hello I just wanted to thank you for your comments on my poem. While you took a diffrent meaning then what was meant, that's what makes poetry great. Everyone can interpret it diffrently, and it's good to know that someone enjoyed what I had to think. I also really enjoywed this poem, that's why I chose to thank you on this one, after reading some of your other works. Great Job |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Annie, geez I'm blushing  he seems to inspire you lots in your writing  I think you're healing!Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
my dearest midnightblues....yes with the Good Lords help I am healing and after a long time am finding that there is someone out there for me....but this one was written quite awhile back and got pulled up just recently. been a long time since i made any one blush....thank you for the compliment or sorry if i embarrassed you. Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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