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Xeonox
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0 posted 2005-03-23 12:14 PM



The lesson of life,
Come in all forms and shape,
No time is wrong,
Neither one precise,
It could be the enlightenment,
That approaches in the middle of the night,
Or an insight,
In the everyday plight to be right,

A constant cycle,
Of what is tolerable,
Without a second chance,
The lessons are erased,
Just as the steps are washed away,
By the next set of waves,

However in time,
New steps appear,
On the same shore,

This is the trend,
That is constantly repeated,
For the lessons I learned yesterday,
Might still be here today.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-03-23 10:15 AM


So true, those lessons do repeat.
pegasus111
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2 posted 2005-03-23 07:49 PM


haven't seen you in here before but, I've been away for some time. nice read..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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3 posted 2005-03-24 07:38 PM


Good job.  Well spoken words.  Joyce
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4 posted 2005-04-18 01:45 AM


' constant cycle,
Of what is tolerable,
Without a second chance,
The lessons are erased,
Just as the steps are washed away,
By the next set of waves,'

Excellent.

Annie78
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5 posted 2005-04-18 02:18 AM


very nicely put...enjoyed it
annie

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