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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina 
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Love's First Kiss Anticipating, Longing, Sweet desire . . . Feeling but not yet felt, Our stares fixed, On one another, I feel your need, My heart races, I watch your eyes dance. More than my next breath, I must taste your kiss. Tenderly your mouth, Finds mine, Caressing my lips, Smooth silence, Inhaling my soul, I am swept away, So soft, So gentle, Liquid satin, A new moment, A new world, Our loves first kiss. May I just say hi to all my family here at Passions. I have missed you all. Although my fiancee, that this was written about, and I are no longer together I shall never forget him. I pray that time will be my friend and that coming back home here will bring some sort of healing to me. I really wanna say a special thank you to Marge for encouraging me to post again. This poem was written when all was well and happy. I hope that someday soon I will be able to write again. Hugs to all, Juls |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Juliet~ Only fair that I should be the first to read this beauty~ Sending heart-felt *hugs* Now ... breathe ... you're home~  Good show gal ... AND your photo is GORGEOUS~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
juliet_2u, welcome back, breathe in the blue and breathe out the sad as you stay and write for us. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Juliet I am pleased to be able to read your beautiful words of love and longing and I'll look forward to reading more from you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Lonestar Junior Member
since 2002-12-04
Posts 35Glasgow, Scotland |
sometimes i feel not many people realise the true nature behind loves first kiss. Excellent poem! Lonestar |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Juliet_2u: This is such a tender and loving poem and brought back some sweet memories for me, of the first flush of love. Enjoyed reading it and hope you will stay. Sorry to hear that you are going through a sad time and hope things look better for you soon! Betty Lou Hebert |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Juliet,  I joined this big happy family while you were gone, and I love it here. I'm glad that you came back home, friend. (by the way, a friend of our sweet Marge's is a friend of mine, too I hope that you stay with your family of friends here at Passions in Poetry. I know that you will be welcomed back and be encouraged, as I have been. I loved your poem and hope that you will be able to post another one soon. I'll be looking forward to reading your poetry. See you later, Juliet..... ~Ethel (garysgirl)~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dearest Juliet, I'm not good with words, but I really like your sweet reminisce. It takes a brave one to reminisce instead of wallowing in self-pity and hate. Many hugs here. You can do it! Lots of Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome back! You are a wise woman to reach out to your old, and new, friends here at Pip at what must be a very difficult time for you. This poem is so incredibly gentle and sweet. Perhaps, as you say, you will begin writing again. Sooner would be much better for you, and us!, than later! Pour your feeling out, let them flow--with no expectations of writing poetic masterpieces! Share with us, we'll listen and offer our support. ~ Sending you hugs and lots of loving pink and healing green light Earth Angel |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Marge, yes it was only fitting for you to have the first read and I am breathing. Breathing in the hope of new tomorrows and the freshness each day shall bring. Kethry, it was so good to see you again. I am strong and even though I may be down I shall breathe out the sad and carry on. Sue, thank you so much for your kind words. Lonestar, that kiss was one I shall never forget. Betty, I'm so pleased to know it brought back pleasant memories for you. Ethal, your words truly touched my heart. Michelle, I could never do anything but cherish such a wonderful man. Earth Angel, the poem says it all, sweet and gentle. Thank you to each and every one of you. Hugs, Juls |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Juliet, This is a wonderfully warm and passionate piece. How well I remember my first kiss! All of us who have lost a special love know how you feel. I healed through writing. That was many years ago but I continue to write as I know you will too. Welcome back home...  P.S. I am looking forward to your next piece. I know not what the new day will bring, only that your memory lingers in the mist, a warm light to help me on my way. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost [This message has been edited by pegasus111 (12-12-2002 02:47 PM).] |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Ohhh that's beautiful.. Mm, such a warm poem. Don't worry, you'll find that again -Lynne It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very creative piece...well written...I hope you will allow your writing to help bring you through this period of pain.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh, this is so beautiful.. and I know you will love again. ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Pegasus, thank you so much for your words of encouragement, they mean a lot. Lynne, you're so very sweet, thank you so much. Scorpio, I too hope that I can find that healing in writing again. Enchantress, your words touched me so much. Thank you again to all of you, Hugs, Juls |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
juliet~ This is such a loving and tender write. I really enjoyed the read. Great to see you back 'home' again. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 Cause I can~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Bless Marge for bumping it back and you for this tenderly rendered piece. joyce |
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Italy Angel Member
since 2003-09-01
Posts 65Northern Ca |
Such a beautiful and passionate piece. I'm glad I came across it. |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
oh yes the heavenly first kiss, that we compare every kiss there after to. will be looking forward to reading more of your writing. Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Vicky, thanks for your kind words hun. Marge, always sweet and caring. Joyce, thanks sweetie. Angel, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Annie, when it's the 1st kiss from the love of your life no others will ever compare huh. |
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