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LadyDracaWolf
Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 73
CA

0 posted 2005-03-09 03:47 PM

My day started with you,
The darkest night would tear apart.
Little did I know,
That day you would go.
I held you in my arms,
Angel of my heart.

Your cheeks grew cold and pale,
Even though you didn't depart.
Your skin a bluish-white,
Day turned into night.
I held you in my arms,
Angel of my heart.

Even though its impossible,
I want a fresh start.
I want you forever,
Letting go never,
Hold you in my arms,
Angel of my Heart.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher

[This message has been edited by LadyDracaWolf (03-10-2005 01:41 PM).]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2005-03-09 03:59 PM

Very sad. I hope it is only an inspired poem and not a true happening. Love, Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2005-03-09 06:08 PM

Very touching poem!I hope it didn't really happen.

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-03-10 12:44 PM

Nodding with Joyce & Betty Lou. Hope this is just a fantasy. Well done. Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

LadyDracaWolf
Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 73
CA

4 posted 2005-03-10 01:40 PM

Thank you for the reviews.

Joyce-Trillium-Nightshade: While this is mostly fantasy, the feelings expressed here are a result of something that had happened to me.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

5 posted 2005-03-12 07:23 AM

Sad

But its lovely in its own bitter-sweet kind of way..
I'm sorry that it did happen.. But thanks for sharing

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

6 posted 2005-03-14 03:22 PM

very sad i agree with the rest, something that had happened and hoping that you are in a happier place now. i too have been here and finally can say that there are new beginnings.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

7 posted 2005-03-15 06:56 AM

I have been away for quite some time and I see that in my absence, a new and talented face has appeared. Lovely sentiment. I like the way this poem flowed. looking forward to more.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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