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mrmojorisin5908
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since 2004-05-03
Posts 103
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0 posted 2005-03-07 04:50 PM



Sins, they last a while
That's a laugh in itself
But, oh yeah, the laugh took a while...ha
The girl, she's a woman of the devil
Sitting on the thorns of evil
She may gernade the past
Into oblivion, shall we ever see?
But in high times the bird it sings

Sweet, sweet soul take me away
Into the past, please, i need a blast
of comfort that gives me guilt
But in high times sing me sweet
memories...of the past
The bird sings chants of grass

Memories...I need to laugh
Come now, I heard of your sing song lies
Love? That's a complete risk
Take it away and you have a
Sweet fullfiling end, one that stops
I want the bird to sing chants of grass

Andrew A.
"While public funds evaporate in feasts of fraternity, a bell of rosy fire rings in the clouds."

© Copyright 2005 Andrew A. - All Rights Reserved
LadyDracaWolf
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since 2002-09-19
Posts 73
CA
1 posted 2005-03-10 12:04 PM


A very unusual write, both in form and description. Per chance, when read and pondered over, it will bring an image to the reader's mind.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher

Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
2 posted 2005-05-05 08:25 PM


I agree with most everything in this!  I've experienced so many things that I wish I could just go back in time and live it differently (many with regards to love interest choices).  Fun times...fun times.  lol
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-05-07 07:08 PM


good write
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