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0 posted 2001-05-18 08:12 PM



In Keep Of Dreams
~*Marge Tindal*~

In tender keep of dreams at play
The child counting sheep has come
Into this land where beckons peace
She walks the corridors of full sun
Smile of wile plays across her face
Inviting dreams of special moments
This place where memories are fed
Inside this dreamland of a child

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-19 03:44 PM


Oh yes, I loved watching when my children were sleeping. If I could still have sweet innocent dreams like a child. Enjoyed!
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2 posted 2001-05-19 07:40 PM


Marge, this is just sooooooo precious! Thank you for this beauty!!
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INot2B~
Thank you ...
Yes ... they are a study in loving serenity
with all the dreams that play on their faces.

Denise~
I kind of think I knew you'd like this one.
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-05-20 01:13 AM


Lovely poem. All children should have these precious dreams. Joyce
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Joyce~
Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it.
I also would pray for the gentle dreams for the children.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-05-20 03:31 PM


oh, Marge, this is so precious and beautiful...i would pray that we all may dream a childs dream...Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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7 posted 2001-05-20 03:37 PM


Marge:  A lovely poem!  i have often watched my children sleep and wondered what they could be dreaming.  Sometimes one of them would remember and share it with me.  My youngest son, who is handicapped and lives at home, often dreams of conversations with God, which touches me mightily!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2001-05-20 05:06 PM


Ellie~
Thank you for stopping in for a read.
I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this.

BettyLou~
We watch them sleeping and wonder where they are.
How wonderful when they are able to share those dreams with us.

I recall my youngest telling me that he wasn't ever alone in his sleep ... that when he closed his eyes he saw moving pictures.
This mommy smiled with sweet knowing.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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9 posted 2001-05-20 06:18 PM


in keep of dreams....such a lovely thought
marge
thanks so much for sharing this
true beauty sleeps in peace

mistyrose~*

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MistyRose~
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it.
May sleep find you in gentle keep.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2003-11-16 11:11 PM


This is wonderful Marge....

HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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12 posted 2003-11-17 07:19 AM


Lovely piece, reminds me of the Sijo form.  I have always enjoyed seeing children do most anything, sleep is always their most precious state.

Very nicely done piece.

Sparticus

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