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Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2004-12-21 03:00 PM


Friends?

Tears are falling...again
seems tis mostly, they say
sorry for sorrows and pain
happiness stolen, taken away.

They did everything possible
then carried on an extra mile
strength failed, fallen aside
what could be worse, more tragic?

Left behind child, innocent
cries for Papa every night
seems curse repeated, repeated
very, very far from all right.

Years of tears, broken
littering lifelong trail, praying
wondering?never changing
nevermind how, when or why.

In the end...tis both
who weep, bitterly, one alone
his goodness discounted, discarded
her tears falling in empty home.

She needs, he needs, they need
each found, lost, going on
tears, smiles, all of it... history
can we be bittersweet friends?

~~~~~~



© Copyright 2004 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-12-21 03:30 PM


DanielDear~

This cries of too much sorrow ... wishing you comfort~

Merry CHRISTmas dear friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Annie78
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here then there then back here
2 posted 2004-12-21 05:43 PM


In order for us both to go on we need to be able to be friends. I love you tramp and always will. Can we have a friendship from the heart and not let the rest of the pain get tangled up with it? I hope so, you are still a very big part of my life, you always will be and I miss you more than I can tell you!
love
Annie

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3 posted 2004-12-22 01:07 AM


I am sory ,  I had hopes for both of you.  Love,Joyce
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-12-24 08:10 AM


*sigh*
Broken_Winged_Angel
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5 posted 2005-01-13 11:09 PM


*hugs both gently*


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just out of reach
6 posted 2005-01-14 10:32 AM


Very heartfelt writing. Be well. hugs, Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

DeviantMechanic
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 21
Oak Grove, KY
7 posted 2005-03-26 09:46 PM


The pain felt just reading your poetry tells me you truely are vexed by the complicated circumstances of your situation, just wanted you to know that i hold no grudges, and house no anger, whats dun cant be undone, i truelly hope you find whatever it is you seek, with minimal damage to a weakened soul. Someday maybe all will be redeemed. Wishing you happiness in your life, Mat
pegasus111
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8 posted 2005-03-28 08:19 AM


this was a very painful read for me. too many memories dredged up from the darkness.. I wish you peace friend

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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