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symphony_of_thoughts
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since 2003-08-03

Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2004-11-24 02:36 PM

They all wait at the waining walls
Adjascent with the turbulent falls,
Focusing on the washing tides
Only the water allows my confides.
An air of almost calm simplicity
Knowing full well hidden complexities
But still waiting with blank faces,
At these moments God erased the races,
Leaving you with yourself and your bones
With the shifting crowd but all alone.
It teases them to toss their cares aside
Against the ambivalent yet truthful tides
And slipping out from blank faces,
Hidden inside all those unknown spaces,
Where kept all locked away
Until desperate moments of endless days

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2004-11-27 07:14 PM

I think your poem truly emphasizes the need for self expression. I kind of got some apocalyptic feelings with your mentioning of the waining walls and God's earasing of the races. Enjoyed reading. -Bob

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2004-11-27 08:12 PM

Welcome to our corner. Nice reading. Joyce

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-11-28 05:37 AM

glad I stopped in
good read

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

4 posted 2004-12-14 08:09 PM

Good to see you're still hanging in here somewhere.

Very thought inspiring write.

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