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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2004-11-19 08:35 PM


Hannah's World

Fair is the world where Hannah lives,
No woes that can't be kissed away.
Cushioned by arms of selfless love,
She dwells in beauty every day.

Her slightest wish is a command,
She wears her queenly crown with poise.
Innocent and quite unaware
There are less favored girls and boys.

Too soon, too soon to let her know
There is another world than this.
Here subjects vie to bring her joy,
Their only fee a smile or kiss.

Warnings and lessons must be taught,
A world of troubles to be met.
We look into her trusting eyes
And cannot bear to tell her yet.

The time will come she must be told
Of dangers lurking every where;
But for this while we hold her close,
Blessed in her perfect world to share.

By: Joyce 11/19/04


I wrote this after a news article of two small children (six weeks and 16 months) found starved to death in their cribs with their mother dead drunk in the room next door.There was a refrigerator filled with food but they had no access to it.)

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (11-19-2004 10:50 PM).]

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Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2004-11-20 01:15 AM


Though a sad account of which you referred, the poem that you wrote about Hannah is precious. What a blessing that you get to share in little Hannah's world. Reminds me that Jesus said unless we become like little children we will not enter into his kingdom. Sounds like your getting plenty of practice. Smiles. -Bob
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2 posted 2004-11-20 02:02 AM


Thank you Bob.  We would like to keep her world as carefree and innocent as it is now.
Love, Joyce

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3 posted 2004-11-20 05:54 AM


Dear Joyce,

it was sweet of you to write something in memory of the little children, God bless them..
lovely poem that tells of the innocent beauty of children. this poem is close to my heart


Love
MiCheLLe

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4 posted 2004-11-20 08:44 AM


OhJoyce~
You would already know that this touches the ~Grandma Poet~ in me~

Beautiful are your thoughts ... sad the inspire~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Broken_Winged_Angel
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6 posted 2004-11-22 12:54 PM


Very eloquently written.


Isobel
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7 posted 2005-01-15 01:11 AM


Dear Joyce

If only the world could be as trusting, loving and innocent as a child!!!

A wonderful poem!

Love Isobel


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8 posted 2005-01-15 08:54 AM


This is beautifully written Joyce. It's such a shame...we don't know whether to hate the mother or feel sorry for her. Alcholism is a disease of course but to succumb to it so extensively that it causes a child's death? Sigh...
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9 posted 2005-01-15 02:18 PM


Dear Joyce:  A precious poem and I am sure Hannah is precious too!

What a tragic story behind your writing it. I see it was posted while I was away in Puyallup.  I am still trying to catch up on things I missed.  Glad I got to read this today.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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