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symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
The universe is about to collapse Sure it looks fine from there But dig up the black 'n white blanket Reveal what's really going on Rotten at subterranian star roots Barely hanging on by what Socially we artifically created Interplanetary janitors on strike Tossing apathies in the limelight For the sake of ultimate simplicity When what he knows is ignorance And an increasing complexity We are the founders of the free land Universal pilgrims molded by This God, this nothing Even this nonexistent existence That doesn't sustain, but guides And when the hill compiles to a mountain We all drown in the misery of our hatred Our apathy, our lack of compassion We bath in what we always have And kill the rest with our ceberal hammers Inviting limbs to do the bidding Hiding from the hidden Confronting nothing Drinking the yellow water Eating the stale bread Dying in the stagnant shade Already laden with blood Subordinate to the big man |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You describe very well, the world from your point of view. Joyce |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I find your thoughts on cosmotology as well as your views on humanity here very interesting. My favorite line is your last one... "Subordinate to the big man." That made me smile. Good job. -Bob |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*shivers* You do paint a chilling picture here. Very well done. |
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