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symphony_of_thoughts
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Somewhere

0 posted 2004-11-16 11:22 PM


The universe is about to collapse
Sure it looks fine from there
But dig up the black 'n white blanket
Reveal what's really going on
Rotten at subterranian star roots
Barely hanging on by what
Socially we artifically created

Interplanetary janitors on strike
Tossing apathies in the limelight
For the sake of ultimate simplicity
When what he knows is ignorance
And an increasing complexity

We are the founders of the free land
Universal pilgrims molded by
This God, this nothing
Even this nonexistent existence
That doesn't sustain, but guides

And when the hill compiles to a mountain
We all drown in the misery of our hatred
Our apathy, our lack of compassion
We bath in what we always have
And kill the rest with our ceberal hammers
Inviting limbs to do the bidding

Hiding from the hidden
Confronting nothing
Drinking the yellow water
Eating the stale bread
Dying in the stagnant shade
Already laden with blood
Subordinate to the big man



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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-11-17 10:07 AM


You describe very well, the world from your point of view.  Joyce
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
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2 posted 2004-11-17 01:18 PM


I find your thoughts on cosmotology as well as your views on humanity here very interesting. My favorite line is your last one... "Subordinate to the big man." That made me smile. Good job. -Bob

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-11-20 06:14 PM


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Broken_Winged_Angel
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Small Town, Somewhere
4 posted 2004-11-22 12:23 PM


*shivers*  You do paint a chilling picture here.  Very well done.


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