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Brenda Hall Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 88Texas,USA |
Our souls are internal blueprints With exact but opposite matches Our past contains checkered patches And some times make little sense At times our inner conflict shows Peace and understanding we seek Over time our love becomes unique With each nuance our spirit grows Hearts and souls grow with each day We were blest with triumphant blessings No more wonderment or second guessings All transgressions were washed away Through our God's love and narration Our hearts and souls earned a new lease With a special bond and inner peace As we create and live the revelation "thepasionatepoet" |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like your rhyme pattern and your words. Joyce |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
I absolutely love the first verse  Nice rhyming scheme as well. Thanks for sharing this. BWA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! |
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