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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore

0 posted 2004-11-10 11:45 PM



Love is patient
Love is kind
Love makes us happy
Love makes us nice

Love keeps us all warm
and fuzzy inside
It banishes the blues
and makes sorrow subside

Alas!
Love makes us silly
Love makes us hate
Love gives way to jealousy
and then from it sparks rage

Then so we quarrel
and say spiteful things
We sneer with contempt
and become really mean

But
Love also means forgiveness
and using our commonsence
to transcend all evil
say sorry and make amends
Love needs polishing
to keep it good and kind
So shower it with tender loving care
and make sure that it shines

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We often quarrel with our loved ones, no? Well, I wrote this after a quarrel with my mum.. it kinda made me see the other side of love.. the way it should be

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

© Copyright 2004 MiCheLLe - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
1 posted 2004-11-11 06:05 PM


Good poem. Thanks for the reminder that forgiveness is an important part of love.

Melton

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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2004-11-11 06:16 PM


Michelle~
You write such tender feelings .... gently~
Thank you for this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2004-11-15 11:34 AM


But
Love also means forgiveness


Truer words never spoken


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