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Trillium
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0 posted 2004-11-01 05:55 PM








Things That Never Change

The colored leaves that turn to brown,
Release their hold and tumble down,
To lie in piles beneath the tree,
Are symbols of eternity!

The seasons cycle evermore.
The ocean surges to the shore.
The rains will fall, the winds will blow.
These things never change, you know!



Betty Lou Hebert

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inot2B
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1 posted 2004-11-01 07:24 PM


One other thing that will never change, is your ability to present an image through your words. Enjoyed your poem very much.
Little_Spyro
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2 posted 2004-11-01 08:30 PM


Seasons may change, but there is always an abundance of life in them all...just as there's always beautiful poetry, and this is an example as golden as those leaves drifting down from the branches.
Seasoned to perfection, Trillium!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

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3 posted 2004-11-01 09:19 PM


inot2B:  What a nice compliment and I do thank you for it.

Betty Lou

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4 posted 2004-11-01 09:21 PM


Little_Spyro: I appreciate those lovely words very much! Thank you.

Betty Lou

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5 posted 2004-11-02 02:26 AM


Really nice Betty.  Yes, the seasons will always be with us and we have another to look forward to when we get tired of one.  Love, Joyce
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6 posted 2004-11-02 02:25 PM


Dear Joyce:

Thanks for reading.  Nice to hear from you.

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2004-11-02 04:35 PM


BettyLou~
This is just plain purtymous~

I am ALWAYS impressed to read your rhyme ...
and THAT will never change either~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

Hi My Ronnie~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Broken_Winged_Angel
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8 posted 2004-11-03 08:04 AM


They're right you know, one of the things that never changes is your ability to write such lovely words out

Thank you for sharing this,
BWA

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