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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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If you love me like you say you do Then whats with all these games? I’ve been nothing but true to you Yet now everything has changed You want me to act out of character Doing things I see as obscene Like I wasn’t me, but the other her Who I can’t be, even in dreams Mighty are the shoes to fill That you'd place me in But it'd still be me playing a part In that land of "Could've Been" Can't you see you're killing me And the love we might have had If only myself you'd let me be Then we both wouldn't be so sad But perhaps we're just passing ships Lonely, in the night time seas Brought together for a life giving kiss Never really meant to be When my strength I've loaned to you And our paths have started to part Perhaps our lives will have been better For just sharing a small bit of our hearts. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Didn't really know what to call it..and the endings not quite what I expected..hmm.. Your time is here. Take one last look at it, then never come back. This part of your life is already over... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like this and the ending was fine. Never change yourself for someone else. Joyce |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Great write. You expressed yourself well. I, also agree with Joyce. Be yourself. - Always tell the truth and then, you never have to remember anything - [Charlie Jones]. Thanks, Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Broken_Winged_Angel: I liked your poem and I think the title is very appropriate! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
This poem reminds me so much of someone I know, who has practically given her life for someone who barely acknowledges her and takes her for granted... And that was a good ending for it!  Thanks for sharing, BWA!Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Thank you everyone  I've noticed something lately.. I'll start writing out a poem with the story fixed in my mind and the endings keep coming out all different then I planned O.o I guess it's not as bad of a thing as I thought Always, Angel Your time is here. Take one last look at it, then never come back. This part of your life is already over... |
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