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Winter At My Window |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA ![]() |
Winter At My Window When autumn winds bring coolish air And colored leaves fly everywhere, There is a loneliness, I find, To watch the season fall behind Relentless passage of the days That bring swift changes, as I gaze! My window and the yard beyond, Reveal no birds upon the pond. The crickets now, have ceased to sing. Most any day, the cold will bring The first snow of the winter season, Giving me an urgent reason To don my boots and coat and hat And walk into the forest that Holds the secrets of the day. I watch the shadows as they play Deeper down the narrow trails, Until the daylight slowly fails And as I turn towards home, I see, The last leaves fall from every tree And in the morning, winter will Be sitting on my windowsill! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Great poetry, Betty. You find the beauty in every season. Love, Joyce |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thanks for sharing a pretty sight, via verse. We hardly ever see snow, here. I hope you stay safe and warm. Melton |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: Thanks for your nice comments! It's always great to hear from you. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton: I don't suppose you do see snow where you are. We always see too much of it! I used to ski but no longer do, so snow is not as thrilling as it once was! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
really enjoyed this! and it'll soon be here as well. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Alicia: I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and thanks for commenting. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Absolutely LOVELY! ![]() Enjoyed every wonderful line, THANKS! |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
TexUS: Thanks for your comments on this poem and I'm hally you enjoyed it. For some reason winter seems to be passing us by for the time being! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there really is such a lonely feeling about winter...I feel it too |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Exceedingly Lovely. I love how you see the ushering in of winter. As reading, I felt very united with nature and the surroundings that you so very well described in your poem. -Bob |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well that helped! I live on a mountain and the snow won't stick here right now it's too warm, and that is horrible for those that LOVE the snow. Thanks for taking me to your winter scene, as usual your writing is just the purest. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows: Thanks for your comments. I suppose it feels lonely because there isn't as much traffic and sounds are muted. At least in the country! Love Betty Lou Merry Christmas Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Bob: Nice to hear from you and glad you enjoyed the poem. It's good to know you could glimpse my surroundings and how they make me feel! Merry Christmas to you. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Mysteria: Thanks for your lovely compliment! I hate to tell you this, but we no longer look like winter either. All the snow has melted and we are getting rain and fog. The temps. are in the mid-30's or higher! They aren't even promising any snow for Christmas. Weird weather! We'll enjoy Christmas anyhow and hope you and yours do also! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
How wonderful! It reminds me how much I miss being here. Love,Barb |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Barb: Thanks and hope you have a wonderful Christmas and New Years. Love Betty Lolu Betty Lou Hebert |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Betty Lou A wonderful poem about winter. It is hard for me to imagine 'cold' and 'snow' when we are sweltering here 'Down Under'. Looking forward to that snowman....... Love Isobel ox |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Isobel: We haven't forgotten about that snowman but so far, have not had enough snow to do one. I'm sure that will change very soon! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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