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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Wonder Land? A dark star shimmers winks in a sky silver, not blue. A morning made of setting sun bows to evening of yellow hue. Trees perhaps, whose roots are up foreign water, crimson over head. Seems odd to find precious air layered under, an ocean red. From the ship, it seemed odd once landed? even so more. A planet lost, upside down standing under, on ocean shore. One for the books, warning perhaps enviroment benign; just terribly bizzare. The air as Earth’s, only silver bedrock under; ocean, then stars. The ship dark, she shimmers bekons home with human hand. Through a looking glass, Alice could this be your wonder land? Tramp Poet: |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I don't quite know what this is about but it sounds good. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ I liked everything about this~ The imagery is fantastic~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Inanothertime Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72 |
poor Alice...I don't think I'd like everything upside down, but I sure liked this. |
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