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aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

0 posted 2004-09-09 08:39 AM

i have come to realise
that im not over you
and i wish that you were
here with me
so i can slap,
scream, rant and rave
at you for
making me feel
like such a fool

you said that you love me
but if you truly did
you wouldnt have left
just because of
a little bit of distance

it made me want to try harder
but it made you give up

why did you hurt me?
why did you leave?
why couldnt you try harder?

i told you so many times
i dont care how often
we get to see each other
i dont care if you
have a car or not
i can catch a bus
i can scam a lift

when life gets difficult
i stand up and fight my way through
but you have just
given up and laid down
letting life walk all over you

now we are over
my heart you stil hold
and i want it back
so i can start to feel alive
i need my heart back
either you come back too
or send it home by itself
because my love
i need to start moving on
with or without you by my side

*this is about my ex boyfriend and its a bit of a vent but i needed it... its my only escape because i can no longer cry over things going bad in my life.*
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

msflame
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 188

1 posted 2004-09-09 11:17 AM

May I say you are wise and this is a great write of someone who wants better. Blessings to you!

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

2 posted 2004-09-10 05:24 AM

you may say that flame and thankyou... it is a beautiful compliment for someone that is only 17 years old.
thankyou for replying

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2004-09-11 01:08 PM

i have a girlfriend who lives 2000 miles away and i love her with all of my heart.. aussie teen this poem touches me very deeply.. i know ALL TOO WELL .. EXACTLY what you are going through... i felt like this poem was being read to me by my girlfriend. I'm buying her a ticket.. we will see each other again soon

can you do something for me?

stay together with him. if you know you love him, and he knows he loves you,(you are right)just make it work. somehow. someway.

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

4 posted 2004-09-12 11:30 PM

aussie teen,

Remarkable poem! You write with such deep feeling.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-09-13 02:11 AM

you sound strong....keep your head up

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

6 posted 2004-09-14 04:25 AM

thank you all for your replies.
eagle: as much as i would LOVE to stay with him he dumped em about three weeks ago because he couldnt handle not seeing me every day. this poem is for him and i want to let him know how much i love him. even thought im trying to move on.

pat: thankyou for your compliments

shadows: keeping my head up at the moment is like staying abouve rising waterwhen your feeet are cemented to the sea bed..... but i am trying.

thankyou all again for replying

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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