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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2004-09-07 02:33 PM

Silence reigns through halls
embellished in tapestries of yesterday.
A multitude of colors cascade
over dreams of tomorrow.

Echoes carry through out
abandoned corriders
once filled with magical moments
of grandeure.

Mystical bands play
to the ghosts of
what once was,
only to be heard
by empty ballrooms
filled by the elite
of the past.

Laughter resounds
on cobblestone
paths through gardens
of memories.

Fountains begin to crumble
into the dusts of today,
but yet, if you listen closely
you can still hear the music....

and the band plays on.

01-20-02

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

gringakiwi
Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

1 posted 2004-09-07 10:22 PM

Beautifully reminiscent of times gone by. I would love to know your inspiration! well done.

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

2 posted 2004-09-08 10:48 AM

Oh this is A poem of my kind !! A fabulous gentle poem of hautingly beautiful music and ghosts of past.

Inspirational piece.

Hugs June x

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

3 posted 2004-09-08 06:14 PM

Gentle Spirit,

Such a magical poem! This is the kind of poem which emits magical thoughts. Thank you so much. I loved it!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2004-09-09 01:45 AM

Lovely indeed from a romantic spirit. Joyce

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-09-09 01:34 PM

And the band plays on....

Beautiful magical piece Donna.
Much enjoyed.
Love ya lady~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-09-11 05:48 AM

good to see you here...

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2004-09-13 06:55 PM

Gentle Spirit:

I really like the atmosphere you have presented here!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2004-09-14 01:40 PM

thank you all, so very much.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-10-11 10:42 AM

GentlestSpirit~
How pretty this ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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