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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2004-08-26 02:55 PM

Warm Chilling

Beauty, is the night.
Quiet yet so cozy.
Next to you, I hardly breathe.
Yet my heart is sweet as
Milk around baby's mouth.

My hands can hardly contain,
Secretly I gaze at your eyes.
In hoping, that you find mine shine
Like a tear held in by a little doll-
My heart feel like waterfall running
Within my veins.

At last, our chance has come.
Chilling outside may not be a bad idea,
As we can feel the warmth
From each other breath.
Oohh, our touch made us chill still in our heart.

The night is beckoning...(Oh what a little dog that break our silence)
Good night, my sweetie,
I don't even remember if we kissed.
Good night, my sweetie,
My heart want to yell
I Love You.

My heart want to yell
I Love You.

Dancing along with the wind. (I chill no more)
Dancing along with you in my dream. (I am sure, tonight I will have sweet dreams.)

Woo... Wooo...

Tonight, a beautiful night,
And I am chilling within my heart.

(c)August 22, 2004
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-08-27 12:34 PM

this made me smile

msflame
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 188

2 posted 2004-09-03 02:21 PM

This is romantic and very lyrical too. Nice.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2004-09-03 03:00 PM

Lovely Eliza. I hope it truly reflects your life at the moment. Love, Joyce

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-09-04 04:11 PM

This was really beautiful, as i read it, i got a huge smile on my face.

You reminded me that things can also be good, and not all just bad...

Amazing write, I think i will save.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2004-09-07 07:34 AM

Lovely writing Eliza.

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

6 posted 2004-09-08 06:08 PM

Eliza,
Very enjoyable write. It made me smile.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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