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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2004-08-23 07:58 PM

I Am

Stubborn I am as a rock on a sand beach.
Restful is my mood of each day
Regardless the world might shake me,
As the sea brings me on to place I never known.

Sliding across the sand,
As I runaway from waves behind me.
Dreamy is when I sit under the sun,
Imagine the stars under sunshine.

Plain might be the surface of me,
yet no one knows the stories of a rock on a sand beach.
Just like only the storyteller knows her thoughts,
No one will ever know my potential was well as I do.

Stubborn I am as rock on a sand beach.
Playful is my mood of each day
Regardless the world might shake me,
As the sea brings me on to place I never known.

Yet sometimes I would be scared, too,
As I feel I am thinner than the air.
My stubbornness made stay under dreamy sunshine,
Runaway, leaving waves behind me.

(c)August 20, 2004
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2004-08-23 10:35 PM

Very ;nic Eliza. Joyce

gringakiwi
Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

2 posted 2004-08-23 11:35 PM

This is a lovely poem, I sometimes feel the same way- I am sure everyone does. well done.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2004-09-11 01:12 PM

your poem speaks in universal volumes. you are a man beyond yourself.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2004-09-11 05:41 PM

Thanks for the compliment

EagleScorpion. I never thought of myself that way.

Cheers.

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

5 posted 2004-09-12 11:32 PM

Your poem is very lovely Eliza. I would imagine many of us have shared the same feelings. Great write!!!!!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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