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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
Amazing to me is this human wave and how I wash aside fleshtones crest and curl around me oblivious to the man of grey their brush reminds me of touch of days when I had color too but my chameleon ways are fading no longer can I raise a flush I am still now and I only want to flow again yet when the soft tide ebbs I alone am left standing and I alone walk away One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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Tough_Cookie Junior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 13USA |
Red_Feather, I believe this is the most painful piece I've read yet since I've been here. Of course, it's only been two days. Anyway, I felt the frustration and agony that you wrote here. And the way that you wrote it is just wonderful. TC |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RedFeather~ Oh, I like this ! 'but my chameleon ways are fading no longer can I raise a flush' Marvelous thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ouch!!! That was a very sad ending. Hope this is out of a mind's creation and not that of reality. Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautiful analogy! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
I am reminded of a book I once read called "The Giver" about a boy named Jonas who had an opposite predicament. You should read it sometime.  Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody. |
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