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PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
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0 posted 2004-07-26 04:44 PM


How many times can I kiss you
Before the dream is over?
I don’t want to believe my eyes
As I look over my shoulder
Now that I’m over you
I can finally say
I was wrong, a fool you knew,
But look at me today
It was a certain kind of thing
And a flash in those eyes
That gave this mortal joy
To have set foot in paradise
But in this world, now is the rule
And you were the exception
It no longer chokes me up to say
That for a while you were redemption
None of that applies to us now
Fondness remains; love scatters
A love that will never really die,
but,
None of that matters


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with you
1 posted 2004-07-26 04:56 PM


powerful powerful stuff here....
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-07-26 09:30 PM


Sad, but maybe, it would be even sadder if you hadn't taken that chance.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-07-27 12:49 PM


But in this world, now is the rule
And you were the exception


~sighing~ at the reality of this

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PatAngel
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4 posted 2004-07-27 12:56 PM


PK~

One is never a fool for believing in love, even if it doesn't last. Taking chances in life is worth the risk. Nothing we experience is ever lost, only helps us to grow and learn. A sad poem, and very well written!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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