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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2004-07-23 11:31 PM


Retirement

Oh, I sit upon my porch, just to get a bit of breeze,
On the north side of my house, under overhanging trees.
I feel so contented here, with my good dog at my feet.
At my age it takes so little to make a life complete.

Dear ones have gone before and will greet me on the shore;
When I leave this earthly home and don't need it any more.
For now my work is over, I can rest this summer day
And feel pity for my neighbor in the meadow making hay.

The breeze is growing cooler and the dog is getting bored,
I'll soon be in my bedroom just a chatting with the Lord.
I was a busy fellow and I worked hard all my life,
I raised some boys and girls and I had a darling wife.

I saved a little money and I sometimes go to see
My children who have settled in the West a ways from me.
I am always glad to get back to my little valley home.
The older that I get the less inclined I am to roam.

So I sit upon my porch just to get a bit of breeze
On the north side of my house, under over hanging trees.
I reckon there's no other fellow more content than I
In my small home in the valley, where I'll stay until I die.

By: Joyce 7/23/04


[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (07-24-2004 10:20 AM).]

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PatAngel
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1 posted 2004-07-24 01:20 AM


Dear Joyce,

What a wonderful poem! Hope we all can feel content upon retirement and feel the way this man feels.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Beasley
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2 posted 2004-07-24 07:26 AM


You can tell such a terrific story in a poem. You introduce others to situations and people that enrich our lives.
Love, Barb

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3 posted 2004-07-24 08:40 AM


Joyce~
You know what ?
This is so wonderful ... it should be submitted for publication to a magazine that specializes in 'retirement' stuff~
YEAH !!!!  It should~

Love n' *Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-07-24 09:38 AM


Oh, I sit upon my porch, just to get a bit of breeze,
On the north side of my house, under overhanging trees


I envy such a happy place.  Thanks, Melton

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2004-07-24 10:21 AM


Thanks Friends.  Love, Joyce
Isobel
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6 posted 2004-07-28 04:59 AM


Dear Joyce

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.  

Love Isobel ox


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7 posted 2004-07-29 05:50 PM


Dear Joyce:

A great poem!  You should try and get it published!  I'm glad I got to read it today.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2004-07-29 06:17 PM


Thanks Betty.  Nice to have you back. Love Joyce
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9 posted 2004-08-02 01:02 PM


sounds good to me
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