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junemac
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0 posted 2004-07-18 07:38 AM


Stealth & power,
Fearless glower.
Wise old eyes,
Hypnotise.
Powerful Paws,
razor claws.
Muscles gleam,
braided--lean.
Hungry beast,
starve or feast.
Burning greed,
fuels his speed.
Hunting prey,
natures way.
Ready-crouch,
sudden pounce.
Teeth and claws,
jungle laws.
Satisfying,
sated lion.

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-07-18 10:20 AM


Descriptive phrases
My hair raises.  Joyce

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2 posted 2004-07-18 04:30 PM


June~
An absolute SOLID GOLD on this one too !!!

Girlfriend ... you are keeping company with a mighty muse~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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junemac
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3 posted 2004-07-18 05:14 PM


Thanks Joyce, I had so much fun with this one.
Hugs June x

junemac
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4 posted 2004-07-18 05:15 PM


Aww Marge, thank you so much. You are so very kind. I seem to have so much fun writing 'thin poems' I just get caried away with them lol.
Hugs June x

PatAngel
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5 posted 2004-07-18 11:33 PM


Dear June,

Wonderfully written!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

junemac
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6 posted 2004-07-20 04:22 PM


aw thanks I had so much fun writing this. glad you liked it
hugs  June x

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