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PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
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0 posted 2004-07-14 01:35 AM



Approaching Storm - Haiku

A cool mid-day breeze
calms the heat of the sun
A storm approaches.

Raindrops start falling
bringing life to the earth
Thunder breaks silence.

River overflows
animals flee for cover
Seeking higher ground.

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

© Copyright 2004 Patricia Valle - All Rights Reserved
Annie78
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
1 posted 2004-07-14 11:34 AM


wow Pat
this is pretty!
makes me want to stand in the rain...
no wait the Trampster took me for a ride
last night in the lightning and the rain.
There was thunder and black sky all around
and we rode fast enough to dodge some of the raindrops!
it was great!

love
Annie

Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
2 posted 2004-07-14 11:38 AM


this is beautiful Pat!
yeppers we went out looking for
lightning on the scooter last night
and found quite a bit!
Was pretty well soaked when we got home...
but was welcome change from the Tucson sun!
Riding in the desert with the thunder booming and the sky lighting up... with mama
laughing behind me...was stuff poetry is
made of...hmmm  be right back, lol
daniel

Purple Poet On Wheels
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3 posted 2004-07-14 01:01 PM


Really great

Vote Kerry/Edwards

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21
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New Orleans, LA
4 posted 2004-07-14 01:03 PM


You can feel the electricity in this Pat...
PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
California
5 posted 2004-07-14 04:27 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I am blushing, as I had no idea how people wouuld respong to an amateur.

Love and hugs to you all,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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