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Approaching Storm - Haiku |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Approaching Storm - Haiku A cool mid-day breeze calms the heat of the sun A storm approaches. Raindrops start falling bringing life to the earth Thunder breaks silence. River overflows animals flee for cover Seeking higher ground. 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
wow Pat this is pretty! makes me want to stand in the rain... no wait the Trampster took me for a ride last night in the lightning and the rain. There was thunder and black sky all around and we rode fast enough to dodge some of the raindrops! it was great! love Annie |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
this is beautiful Pat! yeppers we went out looking for lightning on the scooter last night and found quite a bit! Was pretty well soaked when we got home... but was welcome change from the Tucson sun! Riding in the desert with the thunder booming and the sky lighting up... with mama laughing behind me...was stuff poetry is made of...hmmm be right back, lol daniel |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
Really great Vote Kerry/Edwards |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
You can feel the electricity in this Pat... |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I am blushing, as I had no idea how people wouuld respong to an amateur. Love and hugs to you all, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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