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Since I held her

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-07-08 08:55 AM

Since I held her like a little broken flower
And watered her with my tears,
She awoke under her very own power
And chased away all the fears

It has brought me pleasure and pain
All she needs to do is look in my eyes
Each day she's an island in the rain
When she breaks down and cries

And I would try to catch her from falling
So we could stand and then run away,
Why couldn't she hear me calling
And why didn't she ever say,

That she loved me;
If only she loved me...

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

1 posted 2004-07-08 03:13 PM

PK~

I almost wept at the tenderness of your words. What emotion this is!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2004-07-08 04:29 PM

Thank you very much Pat. There probably is no greater compliment than that for any of us here...

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2004-07-09 01:33 AM

Well done. Joyce

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2004-07-09 10:33 PM

oh.

That made me sad.
;

good poem

peaceful_dreamer
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since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

5 posted 2004-07-15 03:33 AM

This is really great. I LOVE the first two lines. Very beautifully written!
-Peaceful

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

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