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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada 
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You treat me like a trophy, That's all I am to you. Something you can brag about, When nothing is going right. Something you can turn you back on In the middle of the night. Someone you can laugh with When there's no one else around. Someone to sit aside all day, And wait for your return. The way you say my name sometimes, Makes me want to smack you. The way you touch my skin at night, Forces me to reject you. I thought that you were different. Slowly I'm beginning to see, Anything you do or say, does not include me. Anything I say or do, you can pay no mind to. After all I'm only here for show, Your eluded trophy. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I hope the girl in this poem is aware that she has too much worth to be anyone's trophy. Love, Joyce |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Amanda, You've captured in your poetic writing what quite a few young women experience. I hope this does not pretain to you. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Amanda, I hope that you didn't have to go through this painful ordeal.. I do like the way the emotions flow in your writing. Thanks for sharing  Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
thankx everyone for your lovely comments  |
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