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Trillium
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0 posted 2004-06-05 10:29 PM






High North

Wherever mountains soar on high
And eagles scream from out the sky,
Where raging waters race and foam,
That's where I'd like to make my home!

I'd like to be a part of spring,
When melting snows of April bring
Small flowers, blooming in the cold.
Mauve saxifrage, marsh marigold.

I'd watch the leaves fill up the trees
And smell new sap upon the breeze.
I'd listen to the sound of loons
Mad courting, in the lakes lagoons.

In summer, I would travel far
Across the hills.  I'd count each star
That blazed so briefly on short nights.
In autumn, gaze at northern lights..

I'd see the aspens golden tide
Run color down the mountainside
And when the snow began to fall,
I'd feel the silence, over all!

I'd then my lonely vigil keep,
While most of nature lies asleep,
Knowing before long, I'd see,
The signs of spring, return to me!





Betty Lou Hebert


Published by Moose Bound Press, 1998

© Copyright 2004 Betty Lou Hebert - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-06-06 12:53 PM


Another winner Betty.  You amaze me.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2004-06-06 06:15 AM


Dear Betty Lou

Breathtakingly wonderful.  Nature is so grand when you verse it.

Love Isobel ox


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3 posted 2004-06-06 06:22 AM


You never cease to amaze me. This poem takes my breath away.
Love, Barb

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4 posted 2004-06-06 03:30 PM


Dear Joyce: Thank you so much!

Love
Betty Lou

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Trillium
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5 posted 2004-06-06 03:31 PM


Dear Isobel:  I'm happy to hear you liked this and thanks for taking the trouble to come into the site and comment.  I know it isn't easy for you to do that.

Love
Betty Lou

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6 posted 2004-06-06 03:32 PM


Dear Barb:  You are always so complimentary!
Thanks for responding.

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2004-06-06 10:48 PM


Hello Betty Lou

You always paint the most vivid and beautiful pictures with your words, which are a pleasure to read.

Take care.........Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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8 posted 2004-06-07 01:47 PM


Dear Sue:

Thanks for responding and you too, paint lovely pictures with your poems!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2004-06-09 05:12 AM


Oh yes this is breath taking. Love your imagery and power with words.
Hugs from June x

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10 posted 2004-06-09 02:32 PM


Dear June;  How nice to hear from you. I've missed seeing you post here.  Thanks for the lovely comments.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2004-06-27 12:37 PM


Dear Betty Lou,

You have an amazing way with words. Beautiful imagery!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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12 posted 2004-06-27 10:50 AM


Hi Betty,

thanks for sharing, the refreshing atmosphere is contagious!

Love
MiCheLLe

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13 posted 2004-06-28 12:11 PM


You make the beauty of nature even more beautiful.   Your words are always touching.
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14 posted 2004-06-28 02:40 PM


Patricia:  Thanks for the nice compliment.
I enjoyed hearing from you.

Love
Betty Lou

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15 posted 2004-06-28 02:42 PM


MiCheLLe:  Thanks.  I guess this scenery I described is quite different from yours! Glad you liked the poem.

Love
Betty Lou

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16 posted 2004-06-28 02:43 PM


SPIRIT:  Thank you for taking time to comment!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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17 posted 2004-06-28 03:34 PM


BettyLou~
You know what ? ... I declare that this could be framed and everyone would swear that it was a painted canvas~

What you do with word-paint is amazing, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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18 posted 2004-06-28 03:51 PM


I'd then my lonely vigil keep,
While most of nature lies asleep,
Knowing before long, I'd see,
The signs of spring, return to me!


I loved this ending stanza. Nature captured perfectly.

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19 posted 2004-06-30 03:23 PM


Dear Marge:  Thank you so much for your glowing words!  I appreciate them and you!

Love
Betty Lou

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20 posted 2004-06-30 03:24 PM


PKreturns:  Thanks a lot for taking time to comment on this poem. Nice to hear from you!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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21 posted 2004-07-06 02:46 AM


just lovely
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22 posted 2004-07-06 06:13 PM


passing shadows:  Thanks a lot!

Love
Betty Lou

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