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High North |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
High North Wherever mountains soar on high And eagles scream from out the sky, Where raging waters race and foam, That's where I'd like to make my home! I'd like to be a part of spring, When melting snows of April bring Small flowers, blooming in the cold. Mauve saxifrage, marsh marigold. I'd watch the leaves fill up the trees And smell new sap upon the breeze. I'd listen to the sound of loons Mad courting, in the lakes lagoons. In summer, I would travel far Across the hills. I'd count each star That blazed so briefly on short nights. In autumn, gaze at northern lights.. I'd see the aspens golden tide Run color down the mountainside And when the snow began to fall, I'd feel the silence, over all! I'd then my lonely vigil keep, While most of nature lies asleep, Knowing before long, I'd see, The signs of spring, return to me! Betty Lou Hebert Published by Moose Bound Press, 1998 |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Another winner Betty. You amaze me. Love, Joyce |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Betty Lou Breathtakingly wonderful. Nature is so grand when you verse it. Love Isobel ox |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
You never cease to amaze me. This poem takes my breath away. Love, Barb |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: Thank you so much! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Isobel: I'm happy to hear you liked this and thanks for taking the trouble to come into the site and comment. I know it isn't easy for you to do that. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Barb: You are always so complimentary! Thanks for responding. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Betty Lou You always paint the most vivid and beautiful pictures with your words, which are a pleasure to read. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Sue: Thanks for responding and you too, paint lovely pictures with your poems! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Oh yes this is breath taking. Love your imagery and power with words. Hugs from June x |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear June; How nice to hear from you. I've missed seeing you post here. Thanks for the lovely comments. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear Betty Lou, You have an amazing way with words. Beautiful imagery! Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Betty, thanks for sharing, the refreshing atmosphere is contagious! Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
You make the beauty of nature even more beautiful. Your words are always touching. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Patricia: Thanks for the nice compliment. I enjoyed hearing from you. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
MiCheLLe: Thanks. I guess this scenery I described is quite different from yours! Glad you liked the poem. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
SPIRIT: Thank you for taking time to comment! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ You know what ? ... I declare that this could be framed and everyone would swear that it was a painted canvas~ What you do with word-paint is amazing, my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
I'd then my lonely vigil keep, While most of nature lies asleep, Knowing before long, I'd see, The signs of spring, return to me! I loved this ending stanza. Nature captured perfectly. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Thank you so much for your glowing words! I appreciate them and you! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
PKreturns: Thanks a lot for taking time to comment on this poem. Nice to hear from you! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just lovely |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows: Thanks a lot! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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