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Re-Whipped Strawberry Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Strawberry Of Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ 𠤤¤¤ 礤¤•••¤¤¤ç çStrawberry moonç across• a Milky Way• sky Spooning • with • moonbeams upon • a whip • of • cream • sigh Shortcake • of dreams • piled so high scrumptious • delight in • the night • sky Melt-in-the-mind•flavor so very•appealing Strawberry • moon • so • very • revealing Once • in yearly phasing • she will • come nothing • in this •June sky• left • undone Celestial• dessert in crystal • of dish might • be time to make a • wish Strawberry moon come again •Creme dela Creme• *By special request from my poetess buddy, Blooming Rose* ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Absolutely delectable. I'm going forth to find some strawberries. Love, Joyce |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nobody writes moon-forms and moon-songs better than you, my friend  regards sudhir |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is adorable, precious and yummy! How absolutely clever! I love it! Love, Barb |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis I like your low fat desert of words.  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Yummy, yummy! Haven't been able to see this delicious strawberry moon as we're getting lots of overcast and thunderstorms. Hugs for a great write ... Marti If you truly love Nature, you will find |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge; This is a spectacular dessert! I haven't seen the moon yet but maybe tonight! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yummy yummy...delicious Marge! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
nice, i liked this line particularly "upon • a whip • of • cream • sigh" lovely as always, a bright vision to illuminate my night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
delicious! |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Marge Absolutely, deliciously versed! I love this part: Shortcake • of dreams • piled so high. Just heavenly! Love Isobel ox |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
WOW how artistic and beautiful. Lovely feast for the eyes and soul. Thanks for sharing Marge. Hugs from June x |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
elegant shape shifting and word weaving, dear Marge! enjoyed... thank you, daniel |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
OH MY ANSWER HAS DISAPPEARED FROM HERE. I wanted you to know that I thought this was absolutely fantastic Marge, It is stunning and delicious to look at and to read. A feast for eyes!! Hugs from June xxxxxxx |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I'm going out to take a peak now. Hope I'm not to late. I just ate this one up! ....jo |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
How clever you are - a real delight. |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear Marge, What a delightful, yummy poem! Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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