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Give Me Five |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Give Me Five A chartreuse goose and a hot pink dog Wandered around in the tangerine smog. The smog cleared away and up in the sky The sun winked in lemon with lime in her eye. Lavender clouds started to squirt Pink raindrops that were sassy and curt. The colors all dangled outside of the lines Tainting red daisies and green porcupines. Indian chiefs wore a headdress of blue And grey crocodiles began to chew Gum that bubbled and then they all blew Bubbles in gold,big round and really bold. The kindergarten painted a poem And when it was over, they all went home. Barb Gedman |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is adorable! |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You're outdoing yourself. Joyce |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Barb; You definitely dream in technicolor! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Barb~ Awwwwwwww, this is just SO CUTE~ Wonderful rhyme ...~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Barb A 'colourful' verse. Aren't children wonderful. They are so imaginative at five. It is a shame that as they grow older most of them lose that imagination. Love Isobel |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Now thats what I call creative !!! wonderful, magical and colourful poem. I loved this one very much and it painted a rainbow for me. Very clever !! APPLAUSE !! Hugs from June x |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear Barb, Your poems always bring a smile to my face. Such creative talent!!!! Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Love it!! wish i was there Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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